Loose No Time Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Loose No Time



Who really passes?
We need to think without classes
It is known fact
And we need to react

Time and tide
Always decide
Which side fortune may swing?
Who should we favor or sing?

The pain
Remains
If time becomes static
Time is real basic factor

It heals
And tells
About its importance
With available chance

In fact, time guides
And divides
Time barrier
To act as carrier

Loose to time
It shall then be crime
If we miss the opportunity
As blessed by an almighty

Thursday, September 25, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2014

Lose no time Adebimpe Alo3 minutes ago I liked your rhyme scheme; very melodic. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2014

I like it Felix Reyes4 minutes ago It can say a lot wih a few words. Powerful... Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2014

Good Dermott Ryder3 minutes ago Works

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 3 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome Snigdha Choudhuri and Descah Nekesa like this. 12 mins · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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