Looking On Poem by Paul Reed

Looking On

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You are looking over my shoulder
At everything I see
For, even as I get older,
I'm not as wise as I should be;

Your hand is on my shoulder
Pointing the way ahead,
Urging me to be bolder
Or to tread safely instead;

My blood once ran through your veins
When you were put to the test,
Now, even as the light wanes,
You still want me to be best;

So together we will travel
Until all the days are gone,
Tomorrow and the future unravel
With you still looking on.

Thursday, March 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 24 March 2017

To be together when young and old is indeed a blessing! Mutual support and guidance surely will benefit both! Such love and companionship are what the world lack now! Enjoyed reading this beautiful poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2017

Love points life ahead into our shoulder. Together we travel until eternity calls us. Love for God strengthens us from inside. Unrevealed future is revealed when God graces us. Very interesting and powerful poem is shared really....10

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