Looking For Love Poem by louis rams

Looking For Love

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looking for love, looking at faces
looking for love in all the wrong places
thinking that i could find love in a bar
the worst place by far.

gathering all my thoughts on what i could do
that is when i saw you.
the walk you walked was a walk of pride
with a big smile, and your head held high.

you walked past me and i smelled your perfume
it was a smell which would not leave you to soon
i became attracted to you as a bee to a flower
i knew right then that you had the power
to make me give up the search of mine
to find in you a love devine

i ran in back of you and asked for your name
you looked at me as if i was insane.
you looked at me from head to toe
and then told me where i could go.

i apoligized to you for my boldness.
and that the sight of you caught my eye
and that i would continue to try

and if i had to climb the highest mountain
or swim the deepest sea
then thats the way it would have to be.
but i would not stop trying to get to know you
and if a fool i had to be, until the
day that you would look at me.
i would do anything that you want to get to
make you smile and hear the laughter
this is all that i am after.

with my crazyiness you started to laugh
and told me you did not want to relive the past.
of being hurt and shedding the tears
this was something that you feared.

you layed down the ground rules from the start, and i accepted it with all my heart.
soon after we got to know each other.
and your fears slowly deminished
you opened your heart and i saw what was in it.

a love so deep and so profound
that it knocked me to the ground.
in my heart you will be
keeping my heart company.

looking for love, i no longer seek
because of you- i am complete.l

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2009

looking for love, looking at faces looking for love in all the wrong places thinking that i could find love in a bar the worst place by far................bar is not the place to fine her but soemwhere some times if luck faviours.....so lovely theme and thought for future bride.......10 read mine marriage...butterflies around....anywhere....miss i miss u(if not read)

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Amanda Seltrecht 06 January 2009

I really like this poem, It is very well written and very sincerly written as well. I think that we all want to feel love from someone in a certain way and as much as one may hate to admit it, it is the truth. I say to love is to live, and to live is to love. I just want to find someone that will love me for me, despite my flaws, which we all know everyone has. Keep up the good work and don't give up writing your Amazing at it.

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Linda Winchell 30 December 2008

Bars are nothing but meat houses! No good ever comes from pre-digested meat! Great write Sir Louis! ! Bravo, Ten! ! Linda

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what a lovely poem.. i love how much thought was put into this wondeful.. KRISTA

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