Look And Turn Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Look And Turn

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I had been mild and honest
I did everything possible to the best
Nothing could pay be the best I wanted
It was all failure on ground tested

I tried to be reasonable
But was subjected to troubles
Everybody targets me for nothing
I stand here victimized and missing

I want to cry but can not do
They will laugh and try to prove
That I was wicked and failed
Every where they have trailed

I have decided not to leave
And stay with faith to believe
Whatever be the result
I shall stay happily built

No winter or autumn may affect
My resolution and acts
I shall obey His dictates
Which is in fact relevant and relates

I have vision and logic
That forms very good chemistry and basic
Pay the good and expect return
The god may certainly look and turn

Thursday, April 17, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

I had been mild and honest I did everything possible to the best

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2014

welcome victoria loberiza grana and emiillia lisa 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

Lisa Lombardi tear jerking, beautiful... 2 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

Lisa Lombardi 2 mins · Unlike · 1 Hasmukh Mehta welcome lisa 4 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

Victoria Loberiza Grana Padillo, Keshav Kumar and Gail Desautels like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 April 2014

powerful stuff Seth Greenberg9 minutes ago a lot of demons packed into one poem. nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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