No sun and no air
Just sweltering humidity
Like an unwanted thought
Troubling mind and body
And you- like an caged bird
Fluttering to escape
The heat, the sweat, the discomfort
The sleepless night.....
Trying to push it with all your might
But failing to do so......
Longing for a cool breeze....
A Beautiful write on summers discomfort, yes we do long to feel cool breeze especially in the midst of heat and humidity. Loved reading it.
A lovely discriptive write, you can feel the discomfort of he heat as you read along, very good write. Annette
The heat, sweat and discomfort alongwith sleepless night rewarded during summer in a city like Mumbai, located on a sea shore, beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Thank you Ratnakar for your comment. Not from Mumbai but from U.P. I remember those hot and muggy days very well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Our last summer has been so terrible...... unprecedentedly humid and sweltering......! We felt exactly like this!