Longing... Poem by chantelle ribeiro

Longing...

Rating: 4.5


Your eyes speak to me of longing
I see how you watch my lips move
Your eyes soft and inflamed
by the passion in your blood
We sway with the music
I feel the heat from your soul
igniting the melting fire in my heart
You whisper to me
how I love your voice
No sound has ever sounded so sweet
telling me about your life
And never before have I felt so lonely
Very aware that when midnight arrives
in her raven beauty
that we part ways once again
to our separate lives
of commitment and duty
Never admitting how much we care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Sinclair 02 July 2012

This made me sigh... i remember those looks and thoughts so vividly and now i cherish them in my minds eye...the only time i get half that emotion now is if i cook a decent roast :) now im his comfortable slippers but thats fine... enjoy while it lasts...lovely piece

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Darkangel Flyfree 01 July 2012

A very beautiful poem! Great job here! ! !

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South Africa - Johannesburg
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