Longest Wait….. Poem by Anita Trivedi

Longest Wait…..

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Those nine months are longest period for
a woman to wait,
And she love each and every moment in those
period & forget hate…..

She has so many dreams for her child in her
eyes,
A mother's eyes never lies.
She is waiting for a moment to hold her baby
for the first time,
And other dreams follow in line.
She waits for a moment to give her child that
first kiss,
And feel the feeling of becoming mom & not
miss.
She keeps her hand on stomach & tells her
child "I promise you to give all happiness, "
She tells her child "I will give you safest
nest."

Those nine months are longest period for a
woman to wait,
And she love each and every moment in those
period & forget hate…..

She dreams to hear "mom" from her child,
And think of those tiny legs walking mild.
She waits for a moment her child going to
school,
And baby's silly mischief's making her fool.
She is dreaming her baby's face,
And that smile with tears in eyes by looking
at baby's grace.
She waits for her child every moment,
And lots of prayers for her child to god she
sends.

Those nine months are longest period for a
woman to wait,
And she love each and every moment in those
period & forget hate…..

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Another masterpiece from your Arsenal....Brilliant feel and thoughts...its so amazing that you can write poems like this...clap clap clap

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Nooruddeen Mm 06 July 2010

Expressed successfully the thoughts of a mother before the baby's birth. But what you say about the mothers who leaves their babies in the streets? They would also have the similar feelings before the 'unwanted' baby's arrival.

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Amrit Rathi 07 July 2010

Wonderful poem with wonderful feelings a mother has! This is really a masterpiece.10++

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Matt Mooney 08 July 2010

How sacred the time is, full of peace, before the birth of a new human being.10.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 April 2016

A mother's eyes never lies. She is waiting for a moment to hold her baby for the first time, And other dreams follow in line. She waits for a moment to give her child that first kiss, And feel the feeling of becoming mom & not miss. She keeps her hand on stomach & tells her child I promise you to give all happiness, She tells her child I will give you safest nest. Those nine months are longest period for a woman to wait, And she love each and every moment in those period & forget hate….. What a great mother you would make dear Anita! ! Every child in us would long to be that lucky sweet baby of yours. I wrote the way I felt, I think you won't mind. Thanks for sharing the poem. Subhas

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Nitin Thakar 24 October 2012

Very good feeling has been expressed.

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Preetam Shetty 16 July 2010

True....a god gift to women...the blessing to become a mother.....the blessing to become god on earth...good write my friend

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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 July 2010

And she love each and every moment in those period & forget hate….. Fantastic. Write more. Regards 10+ Apoet B

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Antonio Liao 12 July 2010

A hypothesis statement turns to reality....a gorgeous poetry... very beautiful....God bless....a 10 +++++

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