Long Sight Poem by Vijay Sai R
Long Sight
Luminescent lightings
Spreading over busy by-lanes
Much like glittering necklaces
Moving people
Forming serpentine queues
Coconut trees
Resembling tiny dots
Flowing Cauvery
A slender stream
At so much distance
Vehicular traffic
More like marching ants
All these I see below
Splendid spectacle all around
Gentle breeze blowing
Standing tall
Built on huge hillock
My famous rock-fort temple
Where Lord Ganesh bless us all
, Glittering necklaces, More like marching ants, such a descriptive poem, just lovely, so enjoyable.
i noticed two things.1. this poem bears the same number with the age on your biography.2. you are more of the descriptive poet. its an edge for any poet, but am nt satisfied, i need the life behind what you av written.what you exactly feel when you saw the light.
Your poem seen from rock fort temple-ucchi pillaiyar koil-is exhilarating. Your keen observation in the form of a poem is wonderful. Sorry I couldn't honour your invitation and read this nice piece early.Thanks and best wishes.
're so far away from them Safe in her tower blessing all with your compassion!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 7:05:53 AM # 1.0.0.1119
nice description..... very vivid... good ink.... keep writing