Vijay Sai

Rookie - 307 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Long Sight - Poem by Vijay Sai

Luminescent lightings
Spreading over busy by-lanes
Much like glittering necklaces
Moving people
Forming serpentine queues
Coconut trees
Resembling tiny dots
Flowing Cauvery
A slender stream
At so much distance
Vehicular traffic
More like marching ants
All these I see below
Splendid spectacle all around
Gentle breeze blowing
Standing tall
Built on huge hillock
My famous rock-fort temple
Where Lord Ganesh bless us all

Comments about Long Sight by Vijay Sai

  • Rookie - 482 Points Yewande Adedokun (12/30/2012 2:42:00 PM)

    i noticed two things.1. this poem bears the same number with the age on your biography.2. you are more of the descriptive poet. its an edge for any poet, but am nt satisfied, i need the life behind what you av written.what you exactly feel when you saw the light. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 29 Points Ketan Hukare (12/29/2012 5:17:00 AM)

    man you rock the stage!
    Great work (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,059 Points * Sunprincess * (11/12/2012 8:29:00 AM)

    wow..awesome these lines.. :)
    My famous rock-fort temple
    Where Lord Ganesh bless us all (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 972 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (9/30/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    Your poem seen from rock fort temple-ucchi pillaiyar koil-is exhilarating. Your keen observation in the form of a poem is wonderful. Sorry I couldn't honour your invitation and read this nice piece early.Thanks and best wishes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 56 Points Frank Okoth (8/27/2012 10:18:00 AM)

    i like how you xpress yourself man.....cute poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 397 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/18/2012 10:31:00 AM)

    're so far away from them
    Safe in her tower
    blessing all
    with your compassion! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,909 Points S.D. TIWARI (8/15/2012 7:10:00 AM)

    Nice image drawn with beautiful description (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vincent Kuo (5/28/2012 10:51:00 AM)

    Thank you for the wonderfully descriptive poem. You've painted a beautiful picture of a view atop a tall hill! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kobby Godgift (5/22/2012 9:42:00 PM)

    not bad at exquisite one there (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Steven Cooke (5/1/2012 4:23:00 PM)

    a poem of descriptions. A good poem which needs another verse to bring the meaning of the descriptions in line with the human condition. You need to link all this with a view of the world, to make a statement of why it is here, whether it be good or bad. Poetry is about feeling what other people cannot see, and you showing it to them. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M Fiery Leo (5/1/2012 6:44:00 AM)

    beautiful imageries.....reflects love for ur native place nd affection for it......happy read....keep that up! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (4/30/2012 2:02:00 AM)

    , Glittering necklaces, More like marching ants, such a descriptive poem, just lovely, so enjoyable. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Donna Caldwell (4/20/2012 12:07:00 PM)

    great poem! beautifully said! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,224 Points Babatunde Aremu (4/19/2012 3:49:00 PM)

    Good poem about nature. I like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Richard McClellan (4/17/2012 4:59:00 AM)

    Good job, keep writing... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madhuparna Chakraborty (4/16/2012 9:04:00 AM)

    nice description..... very vivid... good ink.... keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barbara Nixon (4/16/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, wonderful imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rishit Desai (4/16/2012 3:39:00 AM)

    a beautifully described account. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,417 Points Adeline Foster (4/15/2012 3:15:00 PM)

    Interesting poem here. Read mine - O Night -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 137 Points Rigzin Namgyal (4/15/2012 11:24:00 AM)

    ..well written..nice imagery..keep it up.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 6, 2012

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