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Long Live The Unexpected

In the midst of my depression
I wish for sparkling skies
Oh the harsh realities of being in love
This unholy darkness that is standing right in front of me
It is not my shadow
It is the suspense black with envy
The fire in its eyes, quite devastating
The wings on its back, quite alluring
What fortune is in the cards for this great discovery?
Fallen star come to me now
For I have no place to dwell
But long live the unexpected
In my heart there is nothing less
The tension is pouring heavy
I find love to be a mental strain
As well as life and all the ashes
Dumped into the sea
A sea of unfulfilled promises
God my sanity has left the universe
The whole entire universe!
A human rose past the verging cycle of dysfunctional events
Fallen star come to me now
For I need to feel the winds collide
But long live the unexpected
In my soul there is nothing more.

Submitted: Wednesday, February 05, 2014
Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014


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  • Khairul Ahsan (2/7/2014 10:59:00 AM)

    'Long Live The Unexpected' - You have so rightly hailed the 'unexpected'!
    I love your poetic diction! In the midst of our own lows, we all look up to the unexpected. We too 'wish for sparkling skies'.
    'Fallen star come to me now
    For I need to feel the winds collide
    But long live the unexpected
    In my soul there is nothing more.' - The whole poem is simply superb, these last lines are captivating! 10/10.

    May be, just may be-
    When you are low,
    You simply glow!

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  • Neela Nath (2/7/2014 6:59:00 AM)

    I love the light and shade of your diction.Actually, I get the three dimensional image from your poem i.e a total picture of your the then mental-status.Lovely.

  • Sekharan Pookkat (2/7/2014 3:54:00 AM)

    Fallen star come to me now
    For I need to feel the winds collide
    But long live the unexpected
    In my soul there is nothing more. - I liked it very much

  • Sekharan Pookkat (2/7/2014 3:52:00 AM)

    Fallen star come to me now
    For I need to feel the winds collide
    But long live the unexpected
    In my soul there is nothing more.

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