Lonely Path Poem by Aftab Alam

Lonely Path

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Lonely is my life and lonely are my steps
On the solitary path destination like specks
Support me, my beloved, with thy arm
Thorn be the flower and path be the charm
My increasing pain, un-harming you harm

Lonely is my life and lonely are my steps
On the solitary path destination like specks
I am you, my beloved, you are in my heart
For it, I always kept myself away from flirt
Eaten by worries and grief; are you not alert?

Lonely is my life and lonely are my steps
On the solitary path destination like specks
Nubibus of my hope in a lovely love garden
Why heart that weeps and eyes tears laden?
Lord, know by thy wisdom, what is forbidden.

Lonely is my life and lonely are my steps
On the solitary path destination like specks

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Forrester 22 September 2013

Lovely poem Aftab. We have all walked that road of loneliness at some time in our lives.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 September 2013

Great piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. Infact, loneliness is another key of life in which, one needs to be very strong with the mind. E.K.L.

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Inwalked Bud 21 September 2013

A lovely poem of loneliness...Loneliness can be hard to bear at times but you are never alone...Take solace in that fact and that someday you will be reunited with the one you love...

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David Wood 21 September 2013

Embrace the love of nature and you will never be lonely. A lovely write.

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Gajanan Mishra 21 September 2013

very fine very fine, loneliness, thanks Aftab. I like it.

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