Lonely Kid Poem by Brie Carter

Lonely Kid

Rating: 4.5


It's not my fault
The tears fall down
Like raindrops splash
On dirty ground

It's not my fault
You were never there
I raised myself
You didn't care

It's not my fault
Lifeless bodies wander
Pretending to love
And ask and wonder

It's not my fault
I have no heart
I'm empty inside
I'm torn apart

So it's not my fault
When I get mad and slam doors
It's not my fault
You see, it's yours

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 06 October 2008

This poem reminds me one Hindi lyric(oldie) and ofcourse my new poem DIE ANOTHER DEATH. Simple, clear and lucid composition.....well written ...9.....

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