Lonely Existence Poem by Diane Monte

Lonely Existence



I had a dream about you last night
You left me alone and never turn back.
I called your name so many times,
To hear this wee humbling voice of mine.

It pains me that much so i cried out loud, , ,
Seeing her with your loving arms,
That i should be the one who holds your heart
But what can i do, you turned me back.

You love that Girl so dearly,
Even unto death you offer your life,
I can do the same if you wish
Just promise, never run away from me again.

I stand before you, , ,
Crying and begging, , ,
Asking a big Why? ? ?
You love her so deeply than I.


My mind doesn’t comprehend, , ,
The incessant love of the longings,
From your love I live, , ,
To a felicitous life turns to a lonely existence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dev Anand 10 July 2016

I stand before you, , , Crying and begging, , , Asking a big Why? ? ? You love her so deeply than I. love, faithfulness, sense of possession, desire. sense of loss, doubt....... all these you have presented well in this poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 July 2016

The incessant love of the longings, From your love I live, , , my mind cannot comprehend.......... love, its problems, infatuations, infidelity, desires, wishes, disappointments, promises, tears........ so man points packed up in such an emotional poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Yll L 18 April 2010

there are so many fishes in the sea...you should enjoy the show....

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