Lonely Poem by Asma Khan

Lonely

Rating: 5.0


I am a lonely person
I have many people around me
But the feeling of loneliness
Its deeply seated in me

The birds are chirping
I can hear the voices
My kids are chatting around
But I feel lonely, I am a lonely
person.

To subside the feeling
I mingle with my kids
Playing with them for a while
Making them laugh.

Then again I feel lonely
Its my inner feeling
I am a lonely person
like a lonely tree in the desert.
I am a lonely person!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jaideep Garg 02 September 2009

dont have words to explain this.. i admire ur blue poetry.... the why u wrote it up..+10 mam...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 September 2009

WOW! finely penned the feelings! hope more fine poems from you will come. 10+

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 September 2009

Loneliness portrayed in simple words. Best Wishes Naseer

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Dr.subhendu Kar 01 September 2009

quite passionate being alone, heart when knows necessity of togetherness, lucid flow feeling across the alienation, well penned,10++

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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2015

Loneliness is inherent in humanity, we are solo individuals always seeking companionship and love. When our hearts and souls are not fulfilled we become lonely, living in a void. Trying to join our children or others is only temporary, we need an interior life of spirituality to blossom and give us what we truly need within. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Paul Hong 04 March 2012

this is the first poem i felt a connection with..

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Wahab Abdul 02 March 2012

this is absolutely a piece of gem of poetry, i like it most.

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ata khan 05 September 2009

I can understand the feeling, but believe me this feeling is temporary. A time comes when this person who feels lonely becomes the ray of hope for others. And then that is a very good feeling. You'll never feel lonely after that. Thanks for sharing

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Sahar Sahar 04 September 2009

Lonely heart pains to cry......loneliness is hard to face..

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