Loneliness With The Sunset Poem by Rosalita Fern

Loneliness With The Sunset

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Lonely Sunset

Alone with the Sun
And The suns last rays.
I wish for the sun to ease my pain.
I pray for the suns last warmth to wrap away my loneliness.

Alone with the Sea,
The seas tide seizes away.
I wish for the sea to wash my pain away.
I pray for the sea s embrace with take away the loneliness.

Alone,
With the lonely sunset.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I like the form of this poem and how the sentences stretch out to the same size from each stanza. Also the sun and sea bring me pictures of the sea and the sun setting and it beautifully describes how lonely you are. Great work! 10 Karin Anderson

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