“loneliness And Longings” Poem by aira olayvar

“loneliness And Longings”

Rating: 2.4


Days are void as it passes by,
Only hurts and pains are there inside…
Loneliness is what’s left beside…

I am longing for you,
My heart continually whispers in my ears…
I am longing for you.

It resounds again and again and my loneliness grows strong and stronger…
Tears are falling, oh… how am I to stop the rain that’s falling?
When the loneliness I felt was just caused by my longings of you,
And when my longings caused me to so much loneliness…

Please tell me just what should I do?

-aira

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 January 2010

t resounds again and again and my loneliness grows strong and stronger… Tears are falling, oh… how am I to stop the rain that’s falling? When the loneliness I felt was just caused by my longings of you, ...........don't allow your tears to fall else it may bring discredit to you.... lovely feeling and best presentation......10 read mine.........cry not.. teacher's woe...pleasant exchanges...

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Afzal Shauq 10 January 2010

a rich piece..lovely hmmm liked it 10/10

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Akram Awadat 23 December 2009

wow fantastic poem well done aira

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