Loneliness Poem by Joey Nissen

Loneliness

Rating: 2.7


A giant gap
Something's gone
I just don't get
Where it all went wrong
My heart is black
My body's cold
I don't feel like
What I've been told
My mind is full
It overflows
The pain gets worse
It continues to grow
The tears swell up
They run down my face
I want to leave
Get out of this place
I'm trapped in this
State of mind
The exit is
So hard to find
The hurt is big
Showing to all
For everyone to watch
As I continue to fall

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blythe Davis 24 December 2005

Id catch you man..id catch you the best I could heh heh I love you and Im sorry you were sad Im glad hopefully now your happy cause you make everyone else happy :) okay rock on good words

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-s.i.m. 26 May 2005

if u'r falling buddy, just say the word an' me an' my jet fighter buddies'll snag ya outa the air for some smooth sailing.

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Joey Nissen

Joey Nissen

St.Paul Minnesota
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