Loneliness Poem by Sudipta Bhattacharyya

Loneliness

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I don't know whether your muteness
Is just your personality or not.
I always take life as easy as downy flake
In winter morning, sweet yet mute like you.
Your appearance sometimes create commotion
Through my evey vein & spine, though you are silent.
I know not if muteness is another part of loneliness.
If that is so, I wish your mute appearance.
For I know my loneliness is because of your muteness.

Wednesday, November 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: romantic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shakil Ahmed 18 November 2015

beautiful love poem, the poem has expressed your heartfelt thoughts, well penned thanks for sharing

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Lovely lines that are loadedwith lonliness.

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Dinda Khairani 09 December 2015

The way you express your feeling is actually make the poem more beautiful. Thanks for sharing.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2015

Mute like you; but, with a vision. Nice work.

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Beach Girl 25 November 2015

I really enjoyed this poem. In just a few words you aptly expressed how this persons silence causes oyou to feel lonely, but yet hopeful

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Seema Jayaraman 18 November 2015

Silence can speak volumes.. yet it can cause feelings of pain and loneliness.. thanks for sharing

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Sudipta Bhattacharyya

Sudipta Bhattacharyya

Berhampore, Murshidabad, west Bengal
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