Loneliness Poem by Anoop Lokkur

Loneliness

Rating: 2.2


Without love and in emptiness
crawling like a snail
like a shadow always behind.
When the time is infinte
and the wait is long
oh loneliness!
you are my only companion
till i find another.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Tyler 08 October 2006

Very clever, your best yet. You are getting even more poetic and the phrasing is superb. By writing shorter work, you make ever word count.

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Asma Bahrainwala 08 October 2006

'oh loneliness! you are my only companion'.....an interesting juxtaposition.. i too hv a poem wid the same title... asma..

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Ashish R 08 October 2006

Well said.Your short poem does make its point clear. Ashish.

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Ashish R 08 October 2006

Well said.Your short poem does make it point clear. Ashish.

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