~ Lolololololol! ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Lolololololol! ~

Rating: 4.9


~ LolololololoL! ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
April 27,2010.

Give me that
Stupid intelligence
To underunderstand
Intelligent stupids!

Give me that
Deaf eager ear
To listen
Euphonic cacophony!

Give me that
Blind veritable vision
To view cyclorama e’er
Argus-eyed view ne’er!

Give me that
Rocky ricrac heart
To embellish emblazon
Bonanzas of smiling Daisy!

I shun revel wassail
Normal senses
They’re indeed
Foolery formal
Petite elfin normal!

I’m Ms. Nivedita no
Stickjawed poseur
Au fait mandiblectual
LolololololoL!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

You definitely have a way with words, and i am sure you have the intelligence that assists you in using those words to create wonderful poems - with a difference

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Give me that Stupid intelligence To underunderstand Intelligent stupids..... hi let us remain stupid intellegent only.. nicely presented feeling.. liked it most.....10 read mine m in tears...at least say no

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Noel Horlanda 08 May 2010

Well you started with a stupid word and line...and I think this craft is also stupid in nature. You play strange and funny words which are undecipherable. At least this is a unique form of poetry. Thanks

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Noel Horlanda 08 May 2010

Well you started this craft with stupid word and line...so I guess this is stupid all the way. I mean you played with strange and funny lingo and it is undecipherable for me. At least this is a unique and weird form of poetry or expression.

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nature 360 09 May 2010

'Give me that Stupid intelligence To underunderstand Intelligent stupids! ' And of course the title of the poem make me laugh with joy at you child like nature even though you have a mature way of writing poetry. I must share this with some one; Lol

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Ken E Hall 15 December 2010

Intelligent stupids boy have seen a lot of them when drink is around including myself and you bisect it with wisdom words as usual Niv in your original style...magic...10/10...regards

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Rinki Nandy 08 July 2010

I’m Ms. Nivedita no Stickjawed poseur Au fait mandiblectual LolololololoL! screaming for an urgency to see various faces of a so called 'intellectual'....a pretense can't survive long and at the same time steal the credit while an 'intellectual' shies away...is lost before found....'stickjawed poseur' defines the intensity experienced by a fake to overcome weaknesses, inability to be....what shouldn't be...LOLouuuud....

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Bachha Chakravorty 20 June 2010

Reading poem and some comments my feelings are I’m Ms. Nivedita no/Stickjawed poseur/Au fait mandiblectual /LolololololoL! Here Poet expressed and used [unsavoir] words and concepts…may be they’re reading it textually…or idiosyncratic to accept it …poetry is vast esplanade…readers have right to comment and critique…i sincerely welcome it… honor too.. We’ve seen many pseudo intellectuals and get mileage and byteage but true intellectuals are behind the screen…or under the carpet… The word used by Poet [confessed with honesty] ‘no poseur’ ‘stickjawed- mandiblectual…her utter helplessness she feels… We must read in-between lines Poet writes, ‘I shun revel wassail/Normal senses…actually these are nothing but ‘abnormally normal’ … [concocted, masked senses] …here she retorts and justly…what is called normal senses are they without matching with true to aesthetics.....many such are flooding PH Post modern type poem with a definite message… 10++

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Lynn Glover 15 June 2010

A very weird and slack jawed poem for some folks to enjoy. Keep on writing and I soon will began to understand your poetry. Lynn

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What I’ll do if I’m with zero aesthetics…Give me that/Rocky ricrac heart/To embellish emblazon/Bonanzas of smiling Daisy! ’ fine finery of feelings… Indeed what we claim as Knowledge may be half learning…vide infra Poet satires with, Give me that/Stupid intelligence/To underunderstand/Intelligent stupids! [Note 'underunderstand'] Excellent ‘poetic-remembrencer’ and memo to me 10++ dr. sakti

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