Living Without Friends Poem by Mike Finley

Living Without Friends

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You told yourself you could do this without them
If you had their help it would undo the purpose
Recused yourself from the argument at hand
And folded into quietness there

You proceeded to suffer for a time
At your hunger and your loneliness
At the nothing there that swallowed you like a bug
And weeping nights from leaving them behind

You shut up like a foreclosed house
So never told a lie to those you loved
And never craved attention like a clown
So never disappointed or betrayed

So performed worthy work and set it
As an offering on the shelf of the world
So it was what it wanted to be
Clean and honest as a plank

Now when you think of them
It is no longer as temptation
Or the music of their laughter
Or the grasp of their embrace

But of the goodwill they bore you
Like a promise you would never meet again
Yet carry one another by the heart
Like a lantern that never goes out

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kskdnj sajn 20 April 2006

Quite an insightful poem here Mike, and so much pride that burns the reader in sadness, the lantern a piece of crafted mind in silence. Well done.

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Gina Onyemaechi 11 March 2006

I like that every section offers something new and engaging for the reader to chew on. Above all, though, I like your message in the beauty of true friendship. Warm regards, Gina.

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Sandra Fowler 05 March 2006

I love to think of friendship as a light that never goes out. All human beings need that warmth. A beautiful, poignant piece of work. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler

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