Live In Present Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Live In Present

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Alone, I was driving down the traffic lane,
My car got struck in the traffic,
And also, my mind got struck in the traffic of worries,
I saw, I met with an accident,
on the way to hospital.....
The yelling sounds of horns woke me up..
I found, the traffic got struck because of me..
I pinched myself,
Oh! I am alive, so happy I was...

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© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Tuesday, May 14, 2013
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 13 March 2019

'my mind got struck in the traffic of worries' - it so often happens with us all! A short but beautiful poem, depicting a particular moment of the poet's mind.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2017

The traffic of worriness hits the mind with forgetfulness and hence it is difficult to create poems. I appreciate your way of presentation and pemnanship.

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Lyn Paul 27 June 2015

The traffic of worries A concern this can be if there are too many things filling the mind. Here, I witness so many speeding, aggressive women drivers with children in the car.

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Ramesh Rai 30 March 2014

yes it is right what you say here. but if we always remain in present it shall not be able to creat poem. i appreciate your thought and write. Regards.10++++

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Gajanan Mishra 14 May 2013

I am alive, so happy I was. good one, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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