# Live Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# Live

Rating: 3.5


[ a conversation with god]


In JUST a word tell me..i asked
what do i do?
god just said 'LIVE'

In JUST a word tell me..i asked
what do i do to attain you?
god went on to say the same 'LIVE'

what is this? ..me
am i not living?
may be not he said

you are either scheming...living the future
or brooding...living the past
you are an assimilation of the dead and gone
iam ever a new born
you are never with me at the moment

YOU ONLY THINK YOU ARE LIVING

have you ever seen the wind..he went on
can i? ...(me)
why don't you try? ...(him)
how do i? ...(me)
god went on to say the same again...
'LIVE'

WILL I EVER 'LIVE' TO SEE THE WIND....i thought

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 01 June 2009

Believers have seized to blessing always of god..10... All best, Tsira

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Ency Bearis 01 June 2009

great contemplation with God..try to capture the blessing...

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Carol Gall 01 June 2009

nice talk with God one day you will see the wind 10

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Ramesh T A 01 June 2009

As God said live to see the wind! Feeling is most important! Nice!

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Catrina Heart 01 June 2009

Our flesh lives and die...but our soul lives into our faith............10+++++++

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Bob Blackwell 10 June 2009

Wise words...just live in your own true Self. Great poem 10+

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Lady Grace 08 June 2009

GOD the almighty, the powerful and the creator of the first beginning..grace

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Mamta Agarwal 03 June 2009

a really beautiful poem with a good message. live not just exist to attain Him.. 10 Mamta

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Maitreyee Joshi 03 June 2009

this is a bEautiful poem.so simple but with agreat message.a 10 from me

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 June 2009

God gave us the freedom to live, but we are misusing the same. He gave us wind, water, fire, space and earth to live, what more is required for a peaceful living?

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