Ray Quesada

(08-08-1986)

Little Snowflake (When You Loose Your Teenage Heart)


She walks in
as peacefully
as a snowflake
falling in serene
winter silence
why does her gaze
have to be as sweet
as the wind?
as alluring as a lake?
Am I as fascinating
to her as she is to me? ?

- - - - - - - -

I have this little
lighthearted crush
-there is so much wisdom
in a little crush
when you can have one
with a teenager's
heart, that is...
with the heart we
think we outgrow
- when you loose
your teenage heart
you may as well be dead.

- - - - - - - - -

-she's such a cool customer
and she is one of the only
girls i've met in so long
that has reminded me
that i want to fall
inescapably in love
someday. - - - - - - - - -

Submitted: Thursday, March 28, 2013

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  • Rookie - 85 Points Amanda Laurent (3/31/2013 5:15:00 PM)

    That feeling is one part of my teenage years I'd want to hang on to forever! Love the similes in the first stanza, too. (Report) Reply

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