Little Hill Poem by Colin Ian Jeffery

Little Hill

Rating: 5.0


We climbed a little hill, unsure afraid
Trembling in our innocence
Naked and easy upon the grass
Explored our curiosity and desire.
She whispered: "I love you."
We kissed and I entered her.
It was so wondrously orgasmic we wept
Wanting to remain forever entwined
Souls fused briefly into one.

Friday, August 15, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love,first love,lovers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dean Hope 27 August 2008

very good way of telling such a fragile story :)

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 18 August 2008

Wow... I remember mine... It wasn't very good lol. Wish I could have described it the way you do. Beautiful poem.

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Alison Cassidy 17 August 2008

An honest and gentle reflection upon a timeless moment. Might I suggest omitting the sub-title? You don't need it. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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alice sunderland 16 August 2008

'so briefly' i like what i think you are saying here.

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