Listen To Me My Son Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Listen To Me My Son

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Listen my son oh dear elder,
This is command of mother.
I am your mother commanding,
Take care of brothers sending.

I am your mother lovely Earth,
I have nourished human birth.
My each child is your brother,
You do take care of all further.

My little son is younger to you,
Back to your neck has come new.
Like swinging elephants here all are,
Oh my lovely children do not go far.

On your brother keep your vision,
Drive him in true path in season.
This is your duty to teach him value,
Put him in right track keep in revalue

I command you to be with God ever,
You should forget service of his never.
Service of mankind should be ambition,
In path of truth work, listen to me son.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Oh my dear elder son you listen to me. This is the command of your mother. I am sending your brothers and commanding you being your mother to take care of them. I am your lovely mother Earth. I take care of human birth. My each child is your brother. You take care of all further. My little son is just younger to you. He has come as new, back to your neck. All children are here like swinging elephants. Oh my lovely children you all do not go far from me. Keep your vision on your brother. In season you drive him in true path. This is your duty to teach him value. Keep patience and put him in right track always. Ever to be with God I command you. You should never forget service of his. Your ambition should be service of mankind. You listen to me my son. Always you work in path of truth." This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

I have nourished human birth! Nice piece of work.

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Hazel Durham 18 January 2015

Powerful and beautiful write, thanks for sharing!

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Valsa George 11 January 2015

A great advice given by a mother to her elder son! Here the mother is Mother Earth! She exhorts human beings to take care of everything here without destroying anything! The warmth and the authority of a loving mother is felt here! Enjoyed!

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Kee Thampi 10 January 2015

very beautiful poem and have great message of women education

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Hans Vr 09 January 2015

Thanks for this loving and lovely message from a mother. So beautiful, so touching, so nice. I truly enjoyed very much reading it. Inspiring.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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