Lines Poem by Eddie Roa

Lines

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Lines

My life has been spent drawing lines
Thick and threatening, a warning to others
Not to cross over lest they be thwarted
Demarcations that shut out people and dissensions
Straightest of lines to get somewhere fast
Rigid and orderly, a fine way to think
Never meandering nor considering other paths
I drew a line that excluded all, a narrow lane
Soon deeply rutted through countless hours of long treks
In fixed strides from one point to another, back and forth.
How much longer can I walk the straight and narrow and
Emerge into the light from dark chasms of my creation?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 14 August 2009

very meaningful really a significant write.. I love your theme in this...worth reflecting for.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Fay Slimm 03 August 2009

Well expessed Eddie and from the pen of one who is familiar with its usage, your imagery and metaphor are doubly meaningful - - enlightening verse....10 from Fay.

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Eyan Desir 02 August 2009

''...........Good write......10s

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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