Limerick: Fatty Poem by AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

Limerick: Fatty

Rating: 5.0


There was a big fatty at Ranchi
Who walked out as his wife snapped, “Paunchy! ”
Up to Kanchi he went
And came back lean and spent.
Now she sneered, “You’re damn thin, not raunchy! ”

[Apr 14,2009: : Hyderabad - 500 056]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

must have gone very thin i think...nice tone of humour...please try my humour 'a crude remedy'

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Joseph Poewhit 30 May 2009

How change upsets some

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Wow, very interesting 10

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

Hyderabad, AP, India
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