Limerick -4-Chit-Chats Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Limerick -4-Chit-Chats

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Two friends were beneath a banyan tree,
They were in chit-chats in mind free.
First guy said, “Tree is so big fruit is small,
It is error of creator who has created all.”
Second pal said, “On your nose fruit is gonna fall.”

Monday, August 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: gossip,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2015

Yes, an ant can kill an elephant.............................10

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Sanjukta Nag 01 September 2015

Ha ha! what a message! wonderful limerick

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 September 2015

Truly, God has created everything knowing its perfection

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Lyn Paul 01 September 2015

I like the comical thought and story behind these words.

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Valsa George 02 September 2015

Imagine if the fruit had been bigger! So everything has a plan! Interesting write! Enjoyed reading it!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2022

Two friends were beneath a banyan tree, They were in chit-chats in mind free....nice

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Perdita Young 07 March 2018

Lol! Things shift to an unexpected direction and the standard of judgement will have to change.Enjoy reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Elena S(*_*) xHahahaha wise pal! Enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing! 5 Sep 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xLol funny tfs xoxoxo blessings my dear :)) 5 Sep 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy x: 0) I loved it Kumarmani! Thank you for sharing! 5 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Salim R Javed xNice one.....! ! Its really nice. :) 5 Sep 2015 by Salim R Javed | Reply picture of rain... xHaha... that kind of dry sense is so funny. 5 Sep 2015 by rain... | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xBravo Sir. 5 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xVery funny, enjoyed this., :) 6 Sep 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of Prashant Shaurya xHaha, sweet limerick. Enjoyable read 6 Sep 2015 by Prashant Shaurya | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xImpressive limerick, Sir. 9 Sep 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.........this is good, and funny ★ 12 Sep 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply

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Mj Lemon 08 September 2015

Done with such great style and a quick wit. I really enjoyed the humour. Thanks for sharing this gem.

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Savita Tyagi 05 September 2015

Great Limerick! Enjoyed!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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