Limerick- 30 [ Polturam's Routine: April: Resubmission ] Poem by SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR

Limerick- 30 [ Polturam's Routine: April: Resubmission ]

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In the month of April the great polturam
Keeps himself confined in a huge drum;
Even a step never walks
Going then very easy tusk
Only takes a few caskets pain-killer balm.







Edited by Wes Volger.....[Bellow]


In April Polturam goes numb
Confining himself in a drum
Ne'er a step does he take
For regimen's sake
And pain-killer pills? (he takes some) .



Note:
Readers are free to offer their opinion on the both writings...

Monday, August 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: routine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 04 September 2016

Please Sriranji if I can spell Aratisankar then you can spell Vogler I am pleased to be of help my good friend

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Sriranji Aratisankar 05 September 2016

Dear I beg a pardon Sir for wrongly spelling your title. No lame excuse, but to tell the truth, I have to some extent vision problem...You can find more unwilling typing errors in my writings. However I beg a pardon again...

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Tom Billsborough 30 August 2016

Wes's version is more accurate with the rhymes but they both have a great deal of charm. Keep them together, Sriranji. Enjoyed both!

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