Limerick.28.Mighty Fall Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.28.Mighty Fall

Rating: 5.0


A fat man while clambering up a tree
Was stung by a swarm of buzzing bee
Alas! With a heavy thud,
He landed in the mud
The thunderous sound made everyone flee!

Monday, February 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 16 February 2015

Humorous yes, but hope when he fell hope the bees had fled too.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 16 February 2015

Very humorous indeed made more humorous by the size of the man.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 February 2015

Alas with a new heavy thus it expresses reality of climbing up. Very beautifully presented Limerick.

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Kavya . 17 February 2015

hahaha so hilarious! good one Mam

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Akhtar Jawad 17 February 2015

Thanks God I am lean..............................

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Loke Kok Yee 08 November 2015

your limericks are always a funny read thanks Valsa

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 19 February 2015

Did they flee in glee? Or did their hearts lose the thud? The limerick is good.

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Rajesh Thankappan 18 February 2015

Though this limerick is undoubtedly very humorous, we at the same time can draw an analogy with real life situation if we just imagine ourselves in the boots of the fat man in many a life's daunting situation!

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Rajesh Thankappan 18 February 2015

Though this limerick is undoubtedly very humorous, we at the same time can draw an analogy with real life situation if we just imagine ourselves in the boots of the fat man in many a life's daunting situation!

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Paul Sebastian 18 February 2015

That thud made everyone flee! That the punch. Good limerick.

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