As one freshly released from Bedlam
He asked her, intending no harm
Can I kiss you madam?
As if he were her Adam
Her fist fell on his cheek ‘dum' ‘dum'!
The cheek got a 'dum' 'dum', it is pleasant sounding. Nicely composed. Enjoyed the action.
A brilliant Limerick full of fun and humor. Ha..ha...her fist fell on his cheek ‘dum' ‘dum'! . Did he say again " Can I kiss you madam? I appreciate the way of presentation. Thank you.
women can be so mean! had she offered him an apple? she MUST have done SOMETHING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A man need not be crazy to want to kiss dear Valsa. Maybe she thought him lazy? Or was she holding out for salsa? ? bri :)
Enjoyed another facet of your poetry. You are at your ease, here too.
I hope the feisty fist has reformed the man for good. Nice reading.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is fantastic.....Valsa......so nicely composed with wonderful words.....10