Limerick.23. Precaution Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.23. Precaution

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A naughty porcupine lives on a hill
He has sharp and piercing quill
Nobody pets him,
Nobody frets him,
For being pricked by his quill is hell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 14 October 2014

His quill has been used to make pens for writing, I have seen this animal even in the plains. An untouched topic.

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Kee Thampi 14 October 2014

a tiny knot of naughty porcupine the mind of man

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 October 2014

Nobody pets and nobody frets for being pricked by his quill.......Valsa....phenomenal write.......beautifully put

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 October 2014

What a naughty porcupine! Nice caution delivered through the limerick.

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Savita Tyagi 27 October 2014

So true! Stay away from porcupine and their likes!

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Dinesan Madathil 19 October 2014

The subject matter chosen for this limerick has enough potential to be developed into a long poem. But brevity being the primary structural limit or beauty of a limerick this write has to be so. A fine write from you Valsa Madam.

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Hazel Durham 19 October 2014

Be aware to avoid painful situations, be good to yourself, lovely limerick!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2014

Trouble should be avoided, precaution should be taken at first. Nice awareness poem.

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Tribhawan Kaul 15 October 2014

One of the traits in some of the humans too....ha ha ha...lovely limerik...enjoyed :)

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