Limerick.15. Pot Belly Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.15. Pot Belly

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He ate all that he found on his plate
Never cared for calorie count or weight
Gulped down all the chow
Devouring it with a ‘wow'
And like a balloon his belly did inflate!

Wednesday, August 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: food
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 August 2014

a nice funny limerick Valsa.

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 August 2014

Wow...Fantastic write. Well my heart did inflate by telling WOW...Loved it. Beautiful....

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 August 2014

Oh such a creative funny verse........Valsa.......I really enjoyed it so much

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Dinesan Madathil 14 August 2014

The swelling balloon is a part and parcel of his life and he is often proud of it- We abhor lean men with flat bellies.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 August 2014

Hilarious. Couldn't stop laughing. How many times he might have eaten like that!

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 September 2019

Pot Belly, a good laugh as always.

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Loke Kok Yee 23 April 2018

For the Chinese, a pot belly is a sign of prosperity. No wonder I am considered poor. You are the best Valsa, thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2018

Without counting calory or weight devouring any food like chow is really bad and due to heavy food his belly inflated like a ballon. It is a poem with lesson and humour nicely presented.

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Queeny Gona 19 May 2017

Ha ha! I had a broad smile on reading this muse of yours. Very hilarious and lots of fun reading this work ma'am. To people of this kind mostly food is their deity!

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Patricia Grantham 25 August 2014

This is a good hee, hee Valsa. Made me chuckle. Just like the pot bellied stove, filled with wood and hot on laughs. Enjoyed.

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