He ate all that he found on his plate
Never cared for calorie count or weight
Gulped down all the chow
Devouring it with a ‘wow'
And like a balloon his belly did inflate!
Wow...Fantastic write. Well my heart did inflate by telling WOW...Loved it. Beautiful....
Oh such a creative funny verse........Valsa.......I really enjoyed it so much
The swelling balloon is a part and parcel of his life and he is often proud of it- We abhor lean men with flat bellies.
Hilarious. Couldn't stop laughing. How many times he might have eaten like that!
For the Chinese, a pot belly is a sign of prosperity. No wonder I am considered poor. You are the best Valsa, thanks
Without counting calory or weight devouring any food like chow is really bad and due to heavy food his belly inflated like a ballon. It is a poem with lesson and humour nicely presented.
Ha ha! I had a broad smile on reading this muse of yours. Very hilarious and lots of fun reading this work ma'am. To people of this kind mostly food is their deity!
This is a good hee, hee Valsa. Made me chuckle. Just like the pot bellied stove, filled with wood and hot on laughs. Enjoyed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a nice funny limerick Valsa.