Limerick-1 Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Limerick-1



Limerick-1
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There were ten fish in a fish tank
Sadly one of them died in the tank
Then water level started rising
How it happened was surprising
But their tears increased water in the tank!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 11 September 2014

What intense fellow feeling! Enjoyed this humorous write!

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Salini Nair 11 September 2014

tears increased water in the tank! ......................beautiful, .................

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 September 2014

Quiet a humorous write. Loved reading it.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 September 2014

tears increased water, true picture of the world- symbolic, thanks,

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