Lilly Poem by Dave Alan Walker

AH! This seriously brought tears to my eyes. This is absolutely beautiful.

How very beautiful. This will remain in my heart. Thank you for this burst of emotion within me that you have inspired.

Let me get this straight - if your mother came to see her new granddaughter, that would mean you have a new daughter, right? So can I say congratulations?

nice poem i like it very much

Aha, it is wonderful..: D

Very sweet, pen to paper, words to rhyme, amazing.

Very lovely poem.... as mystical really is possible to be feeling under or through the rainbows....10.. All the best Tsira

Hi Dave I'm Ronel from South Africa. Thanks for commenting on my poems. I enjoyed and identified with your poem Lilly. I think those who pass on let you see them when you are ready and worthy to do so-it brings peace and calm into our lives.

Hi. Dave, Truly speaking, That smile is graceful and precious enough to invite noble souls. wonderful presentation of a great feel in simple words.

Hi. Dave, Truly speaking, That smile is graceful and precious enough to invite noble souls. wonderful presentation of a great feel in simple words.