Like Many Others Poem by Jacob Stretton

Like Many Others

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Like Many others
Like many others
I fear loss
Like many others
I fear for my mother
Like many others
I fear for my brother
Simply, because I care, such a loss would be a night mare.
Leaving many in despair.
Perhaps many are not aware, of the great loss that will confront them.
Like many others
I would struggle to bare, part of the upcoming loss.
Beware, sadly every body departs.
Like all the others.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is one of the poems I'm doing for a school project, I'm in year 7. please give me some suggestions, I need advice, not criticism.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lulu Montey 26 July 2013

Jacob this is a lovely Poem. You seem like a lovely boy and who will make good choices in life... I've met you before and hope to see you again. In regards Lulu x

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