Like Food Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Like Food

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It seems you suffered
But never offered
Gloom picture
For coming future

It was vision
That kept no confusion
Life was to be moved on
He past had already gone

Not pain alone
That has gone
But agony too
No more with the blessings from almighty

One thing must be understood
And chewed like food
Life may face ups and down
That we have to own

Life can not be treated in isolation
You have nothing to bear in relation
It is mission granted to you
You have to face and prove true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 31 July 2014

facing life let us say it is true, thanks,

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It seems you suffered But never offered

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Good flow Angel Plant6 minutes ago I enjoyed it. Well written. Good detail. Very true. Comment 0

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good kharon march4 minutes ago I enjoyed how you weaved this together. The metaphor was well understood.

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The secrets of life. Emmanuel Bandoh1 minute ago Life's experiences must be borne. There may be changes; but, basically, What you see is what you get. it is mission granted... the writer says. Comment +1

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Juicy but bland Eusebius Clay5 minutes ago A filet mignon cooked perfectly: medium rare. Unfortunately, you forgot to add seasoning or salt. This is a valid artistic choice, but not to my taste.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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