Lightning Out Loud Poem by kanav justa

Lightning Out Loud

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Lighting out loud
Hallucinating under the cloud
With greater powers came
Dark clouds and the rain
And also came the greed
And a store of weed

Rising both the hands
Turning water into sand
Amused at others grief
Serving ugly and the thief

As I look into my face
Heart as cold as space
Remembering when we were young
Sprayed good words from the tongue
But everything twists and twirls
Once which was straight now curls
Consumed by my own soul
When power is my goal
When time would come to sleep
I will think of it too deep
Would it be hard to die?
Or in peace, so calm I lie

I did just what I was told
And now I have got so old
Just want to ask oh god
If I am wrong please nod
The path that I did choose
Would I win or loose

So at the end of day
From heart to god I pray
I ask not for the gold
Tell me where peace is sold
I will share it with a friend
In peace I die in end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevie Taite 18 December 2012

Really good mate! Beautiful, perfect flow and so soul searchingly spilled! Really impressed! X

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Johnathan Juarez 19 December 2012

very heart felt and sincere. Good poem keep it up

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Elena Sandu 20 December 2012

Beautifully written! Hahaha they would love to put a price on a soul's peace, how glad there is no chance. The only thing that's left for us is the peace of own soul, true. Good write, thank you for share.

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Valsa George 05 December 2013

So at the end of day From heart to god I pray I ask not for the gold Tell me where peace is sold I will share it with a friend In peace I die in end A beautiful conclusion to the poem!

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Dee Corpolongo 03 June 2013

Wow...this here is moving and deep, and so very fantastic. Power is a soul/life killer at times, and definitely has robbed many of a peaceful, simple life....All for the price of power.. At least you realize this! A powerful excellent poem here....weth wise words shared..

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Unwritten Soul 13 January 2013

You have chose you path, no regret..the road you pick will always give you a choice, you should never regret..just detailed your plan and you not in wrong path just need some calm and figure it out..you will find true value at the last..no regret ok! _Soul

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Neela Nath Das 29 December 2012

Peace of mind is rarely found in human life. We have to achieve it thru art of living. Lovely write!

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Babatunde Aremu 21 December 2012

A thought provoking poem. I like it. Keep writing

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