Lighthouse In You Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Lighthouse In You

Rating: 5.0


Your great ideas
Need bold actions
You really need
Emotional sustenance

It may even be a love interest
Who triggers the “new” you
Give yourself some time out
You need a personal space

Your perspective will continue
To broaden and strengthen
Getting back to deep blue sea
Will absolutely keep you sane

Either for you and your soul mate
An exquisite phase is about to begin
Watch out for devil's jealousy
O dear, beware the rumor mill!

You’ve been going around in circles
This autumn of wave will surely
Straighten out so many things
So get out there to sea, and smile

Let your new lighthouse
Reflects true personality
Your eccentric side
Is also set to flourish

Let all sea's beauty
Recharge your energy
Absorb all expression
Change into synergy

(dedicated to my dearest poet friend at poemhunter, Carol Rhodes)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 23 November 2008

an introspective verses..deep thoughts and greatly implied..nice write.. Ency Bearis

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Rumor Mill very unique. Great Poem!

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Carol Rhodes 27 November 2008

Thank you, Ahmad. You are a true natural reader of your fellow human. We haven't met but I sense that you 'know' me. Words, images have connected us. It's magic. You are a delight to read. Your words of support and encouragement may get me to 'be me' and seek public office, yes? Thanks again. My best to you and yours, Carol

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 May 2009

'Let all sea's beauty Recharge your energy Absorb all expression Change into synergy' Wonderful poem with wonderful idea! 10+++

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Ramesh T A 21 May 2009

A poem of evocation proceeds with the same tempo till the end! Nice to read again!

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Christina Phan 21 May 2009

this poem was amazing 9.5+ gd job keep it up ur peoms are great well done

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 04 December 2008

A great inspiration in poem is shown!

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Brianna Wilshusen 02 December 2008

I like how it goes deep into the mind, very nice.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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