! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! *** Light Of Longing***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

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caravan slithers floating over spumes of waves
weariness by soul seems milling on lap of love
time dissipates truth from mystery of mirage
audacity of hope respires by light of longing.

gleams of light enlightens sky of blue vast
ripping darkness by sheath of night in void
dream comes as moon waxes by full to brim
breath of thirst denounces drowning in wine

moon looks iridescent by beams of white
ocean promises to rave up as when shinned.
green in leaf winks deep by dazzles of rain
warmth smooches grace by gleams of glow in eyes

Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris G. Vaillancourt 06 May 2014

Nicely written poem....................................

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Yash Shinde 26 April 2014

Great imagery and visuals....... The vibrant and colours and excellent use of words, gives life to the oceans and makes reader visualize whole scene...........

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Hazel Durham 29 September 2012

Great imagery, so visual, amazing use of words!

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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