Light In The Sky Poem by Lost(The Vampiric angel)

Light In The Sky

Rating: 3.9


I hear the rain going
thump thump thump
on the window seal
as i look out the same window
i see a lightning bolt of
blue show in the sky
i hear a thump thump thump
on the door
as i opened the door i
see a man dressed in blue
and i knew something bad had happened

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Hale 26 September 2009

a ver strange poem but very secret i like it

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Marieta Maglas 08 October 2009

nice descriptive poem, thank you for sharing

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sweetness :) :) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! nice job! ! :)

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Iron Panda 23™ 11 February 2010

lightning is fun to watch.....unknown ppl appearing at ur door...well thats a problem o.o i liked this....alot! ! :)

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Sarah Reamey 16 December 2009

Very nice poem. Its kinda like one of those things like HEY whats gonna happen! ? lol =P 10!

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Halana Williams 15 December 2009

nice poem =] kinda leaves you guessing at the end a little bit.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 December 2009

yet interesting and beautiful too, i do revel,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Emma Smahlt 20 October 2009

well done! ! great job! ! !

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