Ramdas Bhandarkar

Rookie - 34 Points (Madikeri)

Life, Where Is life!


Life is always light
for some
Life is always fight
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Topic of this poem: life

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

'This place is a dream.
Only a
sleeper considers it real.'
~Rumi

Life is a dream,
One who is in sleep,
Can it be real to one awake?

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  • Veteran Poet - 4,313 Points Savita Tyagi (5/24/2014 9:13:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. Life is all that it can be. Who is to say if it molds us to what it wants us to be or gets molded with one's will or perseverance or so e thing even beyond that. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (5/24/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    You have dwelt on all aspects of life with a verve and reflected on the entire types of lives and the end question-
    Who is there to say what is life? captures the heart! No wonder this poem has been selected as a Member poem ! Congrats! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (5/24/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    Who is there to say what is life?
    Nice question posed at the end.
    Ruminations on life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lasoaphia Quxazs (5/25/2012 9:43:00 AM)

    In this moment life is like you say here in this lovely poem, however, my idea is, that everybody brings out the law for the other. Ones one understand this, life become light and easy, because life is a School room where we all get lessons. If we solve the problems what we create in reality, comes the next one, because until we are here on this earth we just have to learn and learn. You painted the perfect picture of humanity in this moment. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,070 Points Walterrean Salley (5/24/2012 9:43:00 PM)

    Great job! But dispite our greatest attempt, life is beyond description. Thanks for bringing us this wonderful piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (5/24/2012 12:50:00 PM)

    Ramadas, your poem is very beautiful, it speaks of life in so many ways, with every breath we take we inhale the good and the bad and that's life. Thank you for your amazing poem! I love Rumi too, very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 745 Points Sekharan Pookkat (5/24/2012 2:37:00 AM)

    Life is nothing but life
    which leaves ones own signature
    behind the mankind
    for the future generation (Report) Reply

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