Poet of the River

Rookie - 10 Points (july 27 1994 / California, but move around a lot.)

Life's Game (Thought) - Poem by Poet of the River

If life is a game,
What are the odds I might win?
Give me a tally, what out of ten?
If all I had was my name,
And the odds, for me, were the same,
How should I proceed?
What are the odds I may fail?
And what do I do if I succeed?


Comments about Life's Game (Thought) by Poet of the River

  • Silver Star - 3,365 Points Kevin Patrick (5/4/2012 7:27:00 PM)

    For some people life is postponed, I know its a struggle but its the only struggle we have, success is frightening because it means we have to reach another level, another level with more difficulty and some times it makes us want to stay at one level, but we have to give it a chance. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (4/20/2012 1:40:00 PM)

    Concise and too the point. Simply written but deep. What is considered a successful life? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 20, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 19, 2012


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