Treasure Island

Naveen Choudary

(14 November 1982 / Chandigarh)

Life's canoe Turning


Sometimes a feeling
raged abosom lonely heart

My life totally bizzare
You perpetuated a rejuvenating air

Your eyes serene, precating alive
Glare through your eyes
Shines me through the air

Hatred, a strange fire
Burned me entire

But a ray of hope blossomed
With your beleif and love for me
A gloomy desert's glossomed

Thats your love my sweetheart
With eternal powers
Embraced my trodden life
with ecstasy, bliss and blitz
With Your love
life's broken livewires switch

Life's gloomy, am full of fears
Your love blooming, a turbulance swears

A ship usually abandoned and wrecked
WithYour love,
life's ship cruished a deck


Have been friends for year
This time i wanna take chance,
Cann't forsake life's shining Glance

You're my love of life
This thought in mind a rife
I live for Life(you)
And my life emanates you

With you aside
Life's fears complications reside

With your face my life glows
Smile sweetheart,
I will face your life's blows

Am with you
You I don't know
You're my lifegaurd
life's drowned canoe

Your love and Passions burning
That's why my life's trodden canoe turning

Submitted: Friday, July 08, 2005
Edited: Saturday, May 15, 2010
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