Life Or Death Poem by Demarcus Walker

Life Or Death

Rating: 4.5


what is life without death
what is death without life
people comes from the big blue sky
people fly up high when they die
their familys start to cry

life is cold
to the bold
want to turn in to gold
but life is getting old

death is black
like a black cat
hard to know when death is coming
but death is coming

so live your life to the fullest
and to the goodest
cause soon death will knocking at your door

so you would just be laying in your death bed
with nothing to say
with one thing in your head
is this LIFE or DEATH

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

WOW VERY GOOD POEM I REALLY LIKED IT

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

such a wise write, so filled with truth and insight. well done.

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Jason Sherrill 09 June 2009

Again very good work. Better with rhymes this time. Makes the reader question their ending...9+

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tara star 03 June 2009

good job10+, , , , ...................

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