Life Is Not Always Perfect Poem by mona martinez
Life Is Not Always Perfect
life can be ****ed up,
but what can we do?
whine and cry
because the things we want
you can't have?
or just change the way
you see life?
life can be unfair,
why let it bring you down?
you can't change what happens,
or what's going to happen,
you control your life,
nobody else
so to place blame on somebody,
only shows,
that you have no courage
to take responsibity,
for the way your life was going
fight through when times get hard,
why cry when nothing will change?
the people who are gone,
will never return,
that guy that broke your heart,
will fall in love again,
why should you remain,
trapped in the past,
plus everything you want to change,
only to find,
it was out of your reach to begin with,
except for....
Right here and Right now,
because what matters the most,
is when you realize,
that life not as bad as you thought,
when you find that person inside,
that know pain is part of life journey,
even though life sucks,
you have to fight through it,
without letting it get the best of you.
Copyright © 2009
oct 27,09
Very empowering poem, drenched in truth and wisdom. The only thing I would suggest is to show rather than tell. Try and push you're creavitity to new limits and see what you could come up with. You have a great foundation for an inspiring poem.
that life not as bad as you thought, when you find that person inside, that know pain is part of life journey, even though life sucks, you have to fight through it, without letting it get the best of you.................. life is a journey of own by time and space yet trudging through joy and sorrow by tide and ebbs all across betiding may happens to happen instinctively distinctive but by the gleams of inevitability as intoned as when everything ephemeral by mortality and finale reasons to reason by quantum of Zero.....wonderful versing by the philosophy of life, yet we move onwards never yet meandering all across, utterly of course with audacity of hope audacity of hope, not yet of all hedonistic delight, quite eloquently ingenious, superb feeling by reality,10+++, thanks for sharing
yes i agree.. the life is not always perfect and its chaning and always we face challenges and the best you said in this poem is couregeous verses..and you are right what you expressed..its again a good and heart kissing poem..i really liked it..best of luck..10/10
'the people who are gone, will never return, that guy that brok your heart, will fall in love again, why should you remain, trapped in the past'... What a wise judgement wise advice there in these lines! Good for everyone and Mona, good for you too...good work...thanks...10
I feel you are in a hurry to write down your thoughts rather than writing a poem. May be a little more effort...? a little more polish...? All the best.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/21/2024 9:36:54 PM # 1.0.0.1119
and that is it...evrything is not perfect...cheers