Life Is Life... Poem by Melwinder Hundal

Life Is Life...

Rating: 4.2


LOVE
Love is eternal. It will never die out
It will never fade away

IMPORTANT
Importance is eternal. It will never die out
It will never fade away

FEAR
Fear is eternal. It will never die out
It will never fade away

ENJOYMENT
Enjoyment is eternal. it will never die out
It will never fade away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Branson 19 September 2008

Number1 don't listen to greenwolfe 1962, you just have a diffirent way of writing. Be true to yourself, write what you feel. And have fun.

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 August 2008

I understand this purpose of having the first letter of sentences represent th word that you are trying to convey. But I must tell you in all candor that this is no way to write anything. In this case, in particular. It led you to write things that really are not true. This is not your fault. You are still young. But my message is sincere to you on this early point. Try to never write in this way again. GW62

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Marvin Brato 27 August 2008

All things life offers and give die out and fade away in time... what lingers on are just memories! A 10.

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