Life Is A Paper Boat Poem by Yasmin Khan

Life Is A Paper Boat

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Life is a paper boat drifting, trilling
On the stream that runs unending
It’s frail and easily gets wet
But keeps on floating despite the fright and fret
Of drowning; sometimes stones and straws
Get in its way, but a little push of faith draws
It out of deadlock and puts it again on the waves
Moving towards its destiny in all the rant and raves

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marcus Mckinley 18 July 2013

we all set out on a journey of life with no map. occasionally we need a helping hand to navigate the pit falls. if you believe you can achieve then you will. nice write

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Sallam Yassin 18 July 2013

YES true like the feather in the blowing of the wind and the hands of the god is holding us

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 July 2013

Wow. It keeps floating even after it is completely wet. There is no chance to dry it. Beautiful analogy to life.

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 August 2013

Wow. Beautiful poem Jasmine...Keeps on floating crossing all the hurdles...Loved it.

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Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

we all must steer our own boat, hopefully it will not capsize, nice write

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Ramesh Rai 27 July 2013

beautiful write.liked your write. may i kindly invite you to read my paper boat n comment.

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Soulful Heart 20 July 2013

indeed life is a gosamer entity perched on a thread like balance, .......

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David Wood 19 July 2013

Subject to the wind it blows which ever way the wind blows.

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