Life Poem by Sneha Murali

Life

Rating: 5.0


Destiny depends on who you are,
Where you are and what you are.
Life is full of surprises, I agree,
But it curtails the liberty of being free.

We all have dreams to fly and run,
To travel around the world and to sit in the sun.
Life is dreams and dreams are life,
But we must go through a lot of struggle and strife.

The horror and fantasy of life and death,
Allows us to learn about our own life’s depth.
It may be deep or may be shallow,
And sometimes life may be hollow.

Life is like that, you all know,
It can be destroyed with one big blow.
But our heart keeps it going and makes it strong,
So we must never think that life is wrong.

(please be gentle as a lot of my poems were written by me a very very long time ago...when i was 12 yrs or sumthing...this is one of them)


Copyright © 2009 by Sneha Murali

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 01 July 2009

that's good and an interesting way of looking at life..........you know i knew nothing about english and opoems when i was 12.....haha........u r amazing... excellently done........... ;)

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vamsi Krishna 02 June 2009

cool one if written at 12

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C. P. Sharma 31 May 2009

Penned with perfection. You have the seeds of great poetry in you. Keep it up. CP

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Interesting write, love with 10+++

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Sara Tehrani 29 May 2009

well im impressed you were only 12 when you wrote that! its a really nice poem that makes you see the bigger picture of life and look at it positively. Its simple but still grips u in. nice flow. check out some of my poems if you fancy, u dont have to comment if u dont want but wud appreciate it as im always trying to improve my writing. :)

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